{Guest Post/Giveaway} The Writing Process Behind the Historical Fairy Tale CINDERELLA'S DRESS by Shonna Slayton
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Shonna Slayton finds inspiration in reading vintage diaries written by teens, who despite using different slang, sound a lot like teenagers today. While writing Cinderella’s Dress she reflected on her days as a high-school senior in British Columbia when she convinced her supervisors at a sportswear store to let her design a few windows—it was glorious fun while it lasted. When not writing, Shonna enjoys amaretto lattes and spending time with her husband and children in Arizona. You can visit her website at shonnaslayton.com
The Writing Process Behind the Historical Fairy Tale Cinderella’s Dress
by Shonna Slayton
For me, writing is a combination of treasure hunt and puzzle
solving. When starting out, I usually have a story spark or two. These are the
starting puzzle pieces. Then I go on a treasure hunt to find more pieces. When
I have a pile of odd shapes, I work at putting them together, moving things
around until they click, and a story picture begins to form.
Story Sparks
For CINDERELLA'S DRESS,
I had two story sparks. One was a picture book by the same name, CINDERELLA'S DRESS. The cover image is a girl in a ball gown sliding down a bannister. My
mind immediately jumped to the conclusion she was a descendant of Cinderella’s
and the dress had gone on adventures. (The picture book story is actually about
how the animals helped make her dress.)
The second story spark came from research I was doing for a
1930s fairy tale I was writing. For one scene, I needed to find out where
someone would buy a book in the 1930s. A dedicated bookstore or a department store
or general store? I got hold of a book called SERVICE AND STYLE by Jan Whitaker and was struck by the line:
“Until the personnel shortage of World War II, department store window display staff were all male.”
I had never heard of this before, and it brought up all
kinds of images in my mind. Why were display staff all male? When I was a
teenager, I got to help put in window displays and it was a lot of fun. My gut
told me there was a story there. (FYI—the reasons I found: the job was
physically demanding, it took place over night, and in cramped spaces shared
with men, and, at least in New York during the early 40s, women could only work
until 10:00pm.)
As I daydreamed, the two puzzle pieces clicked. I felt a
great need to put Cinderella’s dress in a department store window during WWII. All
I had to do was figure out why, and how?
First Draft
I wrote the skeleton of the novel during National Novel
Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) back in 2008. Drafting, for me, is the hardest part
of writing. It’s almost physically painful to get those first words down. I
like setting aside the month of November to join the camaraderie of other
writers and blast through a first draft. You could assume I’m a bare-bones
first drafter.
Finding the story
After NaNoWriMo I spent a lot of time researching the 1940s.
I had the basic story, but pieces were missing and I was hoping I’d find the
answers in history. I did, in some surprising ways. *Not telling!*
Also, my first draft mimicked the Cinderella fairy tale a
lot more than in the final version. Kate’s mom started out a lot more like the
wicked stepmom, and I considered giving Kate two sisters instead of a brother,
etc.
But I reminded myself I wasn’t doing a fairy-tale retelling,
but an extension. I had to let the book become its own story. It soon took on a
more historic feel.
The challenge with choosing WWII was keeping a balance
between honoring the times (terrible war and sacrifice—think CODE NAME VERITY, YA novel) with a home
front in the United States where people were removed from the war and there was
a certain lightness in living, despite the sacrifices they were making—think SUMMER AT TIFFANY, a memoir that could
easily be YA.
Finding a tribe of
readers
The novel cycled through the traditional query/rejection/revise
cycle until Entangled Teen made an offer in June 2013. I’d found my editor!
Actually, it turned out I found two editors! (Theresa M. Cole and Stacy
Abrams.) After years of searching for the right home, I’d found it. In fact, one
of the interns tweeted me this week that she thought CINDERELLA'S DRESS was “a 1940's story full of adorableness.” *Grin* I found my people.
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O F F I C I A L I N F O:
Title: CINDERELLA'S DRESS
Author: Shonna Slayton
Release Date: June 3, 2014
SUMMARY:
Kate simply wants to create window displays at the department store where she's working, trying to help out with the war effort. But when long-lost relatives from Poland arrive with a steamer trunk they claim holds the Cinderella’s dress, life gets complicated.
Now, with a father missing in action, her new sweetheart shipped off to boot camp, and her great aunt losing her wits, Kate has to unravel the mystery before it’s too late. After all, the descendants of the wicked stepsisters will stop at nothing to get what they think they deserve.
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****Giveaway*****
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1 Signed copy of Cinderella's Dress,
an Amber sun pendant set in sterling silver,
a Tatting shuttle and thread,
a dress form ornament,
and bookmark swag.
US Only.
This book looks really interesting! I love reading about an author's writing process.
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This book sounds really original and totally original. I'm always impressed with how awesome nanowrimo novels are. My own draft that I wrote in 2012 is still collecting dust. I'm hoping to rewrite the story again this year during nanowrimo for the third time.
ReplyDeleteThanks for having me on your blog today. *waves back at commenters* Now, I'm asking myself: How did I not know of this event called Fairy Tale Fortnight!?!? Will there be a 5th annual event?
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ReplyDeleteI didn't know this book, but now that I do, I really want to read it ! Thanks for the giveaway :)
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